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martes, 23 de abril de 2013

Integrative Assignment - Final Version
Allende, Carla - Lacanna, Alejandra - Rodriguez, Viviana


Evaluating  Global Characteristics of Research Articles
     Although academic writing papers share some overall characteristics, every field has its own genre as well as community conventions and requirements. Comparing research articles (RAs) offers an interesting opportunity to explore academic discourse  strategies common to diverse fields. This paper aims to explore discursive similarities and differences in two articles belonging to two different fields, that is, educational and medicine ones. The sections analyzed within each paper shall be the introduction, the literature review and the methods sections respectively. The medicine paper belongs to Jørgensen, Zahl and Gøtzsche (2010); the educational article has been written by Baralt, Pennestri and  Selvandin (2011).
     Overall, the papers’ outlines are different, probably due to in-house specific requirements. As far as the introduction in each paper is concerned, Baralt et al. (2011) do  not overtly express it, but  it has been developed by means of a detailed explanation of what data visualization is as well as what Wordle (2009) means to research and education. Conversely, Jørgensen et al. 's (2010) article seems to have a clear introductory section where the three moves that characterize introductions are clearly established, that is, the writers create the needs to run the research and they also establish the reasons for their present study.
     As regards the tense choice, both articles use similar tenses to attain similar propositional aims. In the introduction to both articles, the present perfect tense is used to show studies carried out so far.  For instance, Baralt et al. (2011) state "Data visualization tools have recently generated increased interest..." (p. 1);  and Jørgensen et al. (2010) assert "Comprehensive systematic reviews of randomised trials of mammography screening have estimated..." (p. 1).  In short, this practice may be said to have had the desired effect of showing the utmost importance of the problems under study. 
     Following Swales and Feak ’s  (1994) "Creating A Research Space" (C.A.R.S.)  model for paper writing examination, three moves should be included in introductions of papers so as to capture readers' attention, and it is sensible to say that both papers successfully create research space by means of reviewing the current state of affairs of their object of study.  While Jørgensen et al. (2010) present  the effect research has had on prevention and by so doing, acknowledge the importance of carrying out continuous investigation on the subject, Baralt et al. (2011) directly open a new area of inquiry by introducing wordles in the field of EFL teaching. In addition, in Baralt et al. ‘s (2011) paper, there is an expository excerpt within the introduction about Wordle (2009), a technological devise examined for use in the class. Conversely, there are no such clarifications in the other paper perhaps due to the chosen topics themselves. 
     While the medicine article acutely reflects its quantitative nature, the educational one clearly shows its qualitative inclination. The former provides specific details concerning percentages and other quantitative information, such as statistical analyses in relation to changes in mortality trends and comparisons between regions and age groups. In the latter, it is explicitly stated from the very beginning that an action research project was carried out, and the qualitative evaluation of the main findings renders itself more philosophical than empirical. The two diverse natures of the articles are reflected throughout the papers but specifically in the methods sections; the article by Jørgensen et al. (2010) openly delimits it after the introduction to the paper, whereas the article by Baralt et al. (2011) does not explicitly state it, although it can be perfectly located in the description of the classroom context and the steps taken during the research project.
     All in all, once a thorough exploration of both articles has been carried out, it can be concluded that although the two articles belong to completely different fields - the education and medicine ones - they share some general characteristics as far as discourse organization is concerned. Thus, both articles contain an introduction, where the importance of their research is weighed, a relevant literature review section, where the state of the arts with respect to their objects of study is discussed, and an accurately depicted methods section, where the details concerning the context in which their research has been carried out are stated as well as described.  In other words, these papers differ mainly in their nature; while Baralt et al.'s (2011) paper offers its audience more qualitative data by means of an action research project, Jørgensen et al.'s (2010) article provides the scientific field with a rigorous study in which exact as well as accurate information is quantitatively explored and thoroughly examined.


References

 Baralt, M., Pennestri, S., & Selvandin, M. (2011) Action research: Using wordles to teach foreign language writing. Language Learning and Technology15 (2), 12-22. Retrieved April 2013, from http://llt.msu.edu/issues/june2011/actionresearch.pdf

 Jørgensen, K.,  Zahl, P-H., & Gøtzsche, P. (2010) Breast cancer mortality in organized mammography screening in Denmark: comparative study. BMJ Online First. Retrieved April 2013,  from http://www.bmj.com/content/340/bmj.c1241
 Swales, J.M., & Feak, C.B. (1994).  Academic writing for graduate students: Essential tasks and skills. Ann Harbor, MI: The University of Michigan Press. 

lunes, 22 de abril de 2013

Dear All,

      Here I am once again, delving into the world of academic writing and exploring my own way of becoming a prospective researcher and professional teacher. But this time there is a great addition that is enormously contributing  to my improvement .... I am already working collaboratively with two peer writers whom I respect and admire: Carla Allende and Alejandra Lacanna. The purpose of this term's publications is to share the results of our collaborative productions in the process of generating as well as sharing knowledge together.
      I met Carla last year, and she proved to be a great partner in EAP. As regards Alejandra, I met her last year too, in my first attempt to become an active participant in the world of ESP. Alejandra showed me how wonderful it is to work with a peer writer whom I do not know face-to-face, but who has always made me feel that she was there, right beside me.
      Now .... it is time to show our academic audience how  things work when already graduated teachers want to improve themselves and learn from each other, trying to find their own way to make their voices heard in the academic world.


Finally, I would like to share Mother Teresa's words, which I find deeply inspiring for everything that is important in my life.... as this wonderful challenge that I am happily part of:

“Life is an opportunity, benefit from it.
Life is beauty, admire it.
Life is a dream, realize it.
Life is a challenge, meet it.
Life is a duty, complete it.
Life is a game, play it.
Life is a promise, fulfill it.
Life is sorrow, overcome it.
Life is a song, sing it.
Life is a struggle, accept it.
Life is a tragedy, confront it.
Life is an adventure, dare it.
Life is luck, make it.
Life is too precious, do not destroy it.
Life is life, fight for it.” ― Mother Teresa


Kind regards,

Viviana